On 14/07/2015 23:13, Denis Karyakin wrote:
Hello,
I completed the Apache Taverna poster.

10 July was deadline for approval participate in poster session.
Deadline for send poster - 19 July.

I used Inkscape for create poster.
This is links to download
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71489000/Taverna%20Poster.pdf (PDF -
for view in browser)
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71489000/Poster_Taverna.svg (SVG -
source file)

Please, review it

Looks good.

Some suggestions:

INTRODUCTION

Workflow Management System -> A Workflow Management System

the WMS provide -> the WMS provides

Can you add Taverna Player into the list of tools in the suite?

DESIGN AND CONSTRUCTION

SOAP/WSDL/WSRF/REST -> SOAP or REST

Invoke any command line tools -> Invoke any command line tool or script

I think you need a line break before Pluggable components of reusable workflows

EXECUTION

shows graphical progress -> shows the progress of a workflow run

Command line execution allows Workflows can also -> Command line execution allows Workflows to also

",integrating with otherRemote" - some text has gone missing

I think something has gone wrong with the text. There should probably be a line break before Remote workflow execution

"appsProgrammatic execution..." does not make sense

SHARING AND DISCOVERY

Probably should mention myExperiment

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Do not be afraid to reduce the font size

In INTRODUCTION you use bold but not elsewhere. I think it is good, so pick important things such as BioCatalogue

It is a very good idea to make sure boxes are the same size e.g. the INTRODUCTION and EXECUTION boxes.

Try to align things

I think some of the paragraphs are justified (so the ends line up). I think this looks strange. However, it is your choice

Alan

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