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ASF GitHub Bot commented on TINKERPOP-1065:
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Github user spmallette commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-tinkerpop/pull/185#discussion_r48475573
  
    --- Diff: docs/src/reference/the-graph.asciidoc ---
    @@ -404,17 +405,18 @@ applications outside of TinkerPop, GraphML may be the 
best choice to do that. Co
     * Produce a subgraph and export it to GraphML to be consumed by and 
visualized in link:https://gephi.org/[Gephi].
     * Migrate the data of an entire graph to a different graph database not 
supported by TinkerPop.
     
    -As GraphML is a specification for the serialization of an entire graph and 
not the individual elements of a graph,
    -methods that support input and output of single vertices, edges, etc. are 
not supported.
    +As GraphML is a specification for the serialization of an entire graph and 
not the individual elements of a graph.
    --- End diff --
    
    This change reads like it made this sentence incomplete.  I guess you could 
remove the word "As" from the front to make it read as complete.


> Fix some typos and clarify some wording in the TinkerPop documentation
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: TINKERPOP-1065
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/TINKERPOP-1065
>             Project: TinkerPop
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: documentation
>            Reporter: Jeremy Hanna
>            Priority: Minor
>
> There are a few typos in the TinkerPop documentation (such as "a big 
> efforts").  There are also a few places where the wording could be clarified. 
>  This ticket would address some of this.



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