Author: kkolinko
Date: Thu Dec 22 11:36:23 2011
New Revision: 1222188

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1222188&view=rev
Log:
Correct a typo an rephrase some text

Modified:
    tomcat/site/trunk/docs/bugreport.html
    tomcat/site/trunk/xdocs/bugreport.xml

Modified: tomcat/site/trunk/docs/bugreport.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/tomcat/site/trunk/docs/bugreport.html?rev=1222188&r1=1222187&r2=1222188&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- tomcat/site/trunk/docs/bugreport.html (original)
+++ tomcat/site/trunk/docs/bugreport.html Thu Dec 22 11:36:23 2011
@@ -552,17 +552,14 @@ problem you are having before reporting 
 </li>
       
 <li>
-<p>Select across different versions of Tomcat.</p>
+<p>Search across different versions of Tomcat.</p>
         
 <p>In the bug database Tomcat is represented by several "products".
-        The same problem should be reported only once, but while the fix is
-        being applied to different Tomcat versions the same bug report is moved
-        between different products.</p>
-
-        
-<p>So a bug that is originally reported against Tomcat 7 is usually
-        moved to Tomcat 6 and later to Tomcat 5, to apply the fix to those
-        version as well.</p>
+        The same problem should be reported only once, but the fix may
+        be applied to different Tomcat versions. While doing so, the bug report
+        is moved between different products. A bug that is originally
+        reported against Tomcat 7 is moved to Tomcat 6 and maybe later to
+        Tomcat 5. So it makes sense to search all the versions at once.</p>
 
         
 <p>Here is a quick list of supported products:</p>
@@ -613,8 +610,8 @@ problem you are having before reporting 
 <p>Some bugs do not belong to Tomcat.</p>
         
 <p>Tomcat bundles libraries from several other projects. You can see
-        README file in your distribution for details. More details are
-        in a separate section below.</p>
+        RELEASE-NOTES and NOTICE files in your distribution for details. More
+        details are in a separate section below.</p>
       
 </li>
     

Modified: tomcat/site/trunk/xdocs/bugreport.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/tomcat/site/trunk/xdocs/bugreport.xml?rev=1222188&r1=1222187&r2=1222188&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- tomcat/site/trunk/xdocs/bugreport.xml (original)
+++ tomcat/site/trunk/xdocs/bugreport.xml Thu Dec 22 11:36:23 2011
@@ -132,15 +132,13 @@ problem you are having before reporting 
         <p>On the advanced search page you can clear the "Status" field to
         avoid filtering by status.</p>
       </li>
-      <li><p>Select across different versions of Tomcat.</p>
+      <li><p>Search across different versions of Tomcat.</p>
         <p>In the bug database Tomcat is represented by several "products".
-        The same problem should be reported only once, but while the fix is
-        being applied to different Tomcat versions the same bug report is moved
-        between different products.</p>
-
-        <p>So a bug that is originally reported against Tomcat 7 is usually
-        moved to Tomcat 6 and later to Tomcat 5, to apply the fix to those
-        version as well.</p>
+        The same problem should be reported only once, but the fix may
+        be applied to different Tomcat versions. While doing so, the bug report
+        is moved between different products. A bug that is originally
+        reported against Tomcat 7 is moved to Tomcat 6 and maybe later to
+        Tomcat 5. So it makes sense to search all the versions at once.</p>
 
         <p>Here is a quick list of supported products:</p>
         <ul>
@@ -166,8 +164,8 @@ problem you are having before reporting 
       </li>
       <li><p>Some bugs do not belong to Tomcat.</p>
         <p>Tomcat bundles libraries from several other projects. You can see
-        README file in your distribution for details. More details are
-        in a separate section below.</p>
+        RELEASE-NOTES and NOTICE files in your distribution for details. More
+        details are in a separate section below.</p>
       </li>
     </ol>
   </subsection>



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