This is an automated email from the ASF dual-hosted git repository.

andreww pushed a commit to branch cottage14-patch-1
in repository https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/tooling-docs.git

commit eaa5501231aa53d118bb685a267fb4e59ed16bd2
Author: Andrew Wetmore <and...@cottage14.com>
AuthorDate: Tue Jan 28 08:48:03 2025 -0400

    Update lifecycle.md mostly capitalization
    
    line 75: the original seems redundant, so provided an alternative.
---
 apache-trusted-release/lifecycle.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/apache-trusted-release/lifecycle.md 
b/apache-trusted-release/lifecycle.md
index 83799b4..f5c7254 100644
--- a/apache-trusted-release/lifecycle.md
+++ b/apache-trusted-release/lifecycle.md
@@ -48,16 +48,16 @@ flowchart TD
 ## Definitions
 
 **GHA Secure Release Process**
-: In a github workflow the release candidate is built and validated following 
the Security Release Policy.
+: In a GitHub workflow the release candidate is built and validated following 
the Security Release Policy.
 
 **Current SVN Build Process**
-: This is our current svn repository process for setting up a release 
candidate. Trigger the ATR automation by incuding release metadata.
+: This is our current SVN repository process for setting up a release 
candidate. Trigger the ATR automation by incuding release metadata.
 
 **Release Candidate**
 : A release candidate consists of a folder of release files including 
metadata, SBOMs, public keys, signatures, and checksums.
 
 **ATR Platform**
-: Apache Trusted Release is a service with a web ui and restful api for 
managing the lifecycle of project releases.
+: Apache Trusted Release is a service with a web UI and restful API for 
managing the lifecycle of project releases.
 
 **Evaluate Candidate**
 : Report on the Candidate by performing numerous checks for policy compliance. 
Fails if compliance minimums are unmet.
@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@ flowchart TD
 : Release Candidates may be distributed to Test repositories.
 
 **Release Vote**
-: Release policy requires a Vote on the project's dev list. The ATR will 
record votes in the platform and also on the mailing list. The Vote will be 
summarized and the PMC Vote recorded in the releases metadata.
+: Release policy requires a Vote on the project's dev list. The ATR records 
votes in the platform and also on the mailing list. The Vote will be summarized 
and the PMC Vote recorded in the releases metadata.
 
 **Failed**
-: A Release Candidate may end in this state. The project can either abandon it 
or resubmit a new candidate.
+: A Release Candidate may end in this state. The project can either abandon it 
or update and resubmit it.
 
 **Release**
 : The release is a folder of files including metadata, SBOMs, public keys, 
signatures, and checksums.
@@ -90,10 +90,10 @@ flowchart TD
 : Send a compliant announcement of the release. This template will include 
release metadata.
 
 **Released**
-: Once the Release is distributed and announced this Release should remain in 
this state as long as it is available.
+: Once the Release is distributed and announced, this Release should remain in 
this state as long as it is available.
 
 **Revoked**
 : A Release in this state has been revoked or abandoned.
 
 **Announce CVEs**
-: At some moment after a release happens a project may announce CVEs that 
either impact a release or are solved by a release. The security team and PMC 
manage CVEs including announcements and publishing via cveprocess.apache.org 
The ATR will update SBOMs with new CVEs.
+: At some moment after a release happens a project may announce CVEs that 
either impact or are solved by a release. The security team and PMC manage CVEs 
including announcements and publishing via cveprocess.apache.org The ATR will 
update SBOMs with new CVEs.


---------------------------------------------------------------------
To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@tooling.apache.org
For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@tooling.apache.org

Reply via email to