cottage14 opened a new pull request, #76: URL: https://github.com/apache/tooling-trusted-release/pull/76
line 21 - If this is a tutorial, let's use the full name for the service at the start, and the TLA for it later line 58 - avoid passive voice. line 58 - 'chosen mailing list' presents a problem to the user of the tutorial. Who chooses it, how, and when in the process? line 67 - change 'report' to 'vote' I note the use of 'use' in relation to clicking a button. Would not 'click' be clearer, unless there is some other behavior that is possible? -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@tooling.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@tooling.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@tooling.apache.org
