Sweet!

Way to spread the word! Your content is very thorough.  I only have a couple of 
minor notes on grammar:

1. In common speech, one would use "What is Apache Usergrid” instead of “What 
is the Apache Usergrid” (omit the “the”).

2. It looks like you cover more than one concept in the “basic concept” 
section, so I think you could use “basic concepts” (add an “s” at the end to 
make it plural).

3. On the first slide of “Restful APIs”, you probably want “relationship” 
instead of just “relation”

Overall very awesome!!


- 
rod simpson

On March 12, 2014 at 9:59:26 AM, Nate McCall ([email protected]) wrote:

This is really good! Thanks!  


On Wed, Mar 12, 2014 at 10:52 AM, Tim Anglade <[email protected]> wrote:  

> Oh wow, this is amazing! *Really* detailed view of the internals, thanks so  
> much for preparing this and sharing it!  
>  
>  
> On Wed, Mar 12, 2014 at 6:35 AM, Sungju Jin <[email protected]  
> >wrote:  
>  
> > Hi Usergrid developers,  
> >  
> > Recently I made a presentation on Usergrid internal.  
> > I would really appreciate any feedback you can give me.  
> >  
> > https://speakerdeck.com/sungjuly/apache-usergrid-internal  
> >  
> > Thanks,  
> > Sungju Jin  
> >  
> > --  
> > Sungju Jin  
> > - Hacker, Apache Usergrid Committer, OSCON Speaker  
> > - Twitter : http://twitter.com/geekbeast  
> > - Blog : http://softwaregeeks.org  
> >  
>  



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