> IMO, no word is necessary. Would anyone be confused by just having the > city > and country listed? What else would they be, except the location? > > > > - On the right "About OOo" should be "About Us" or "About > OpenOffice.org" > > > >I vote for "About the product". > > I agree with "About the product", for the reasons Daniel mentioned in > his post.
* Why not just: About OpenOffice? Has the same benefits, as well as being specific. * Footer has been made smaller > - Beside the OOo logon on the top in nice big letters, how about "Finally a > completely FREE, completely functionaly, office suite" :) * It is accessible, but it would be better to keep it clear, IMHO. > - What about moving "Advanced Search" to the "Search Page" ? (i.e. only > after > a user sees whether a "normal" search works before they try an advanced > search). Maybe also move the "Seach" box into the "Help" section ? * I am tentative to remove the "Advanced Search" option, since some people may have developed a pattern that depends on it (i.e. searchig frequently for the same sort of thing). > - Change the "Language" button to "Your Language" * Is this really an improvement... It seems that it would be be fairly obvious in its context... Anyone? > > > - "OOo in the Press" maybe should be simply "Media mentions" ? > > > >That's a thought. Do you think most people would understand what that > means? > > I suggest "OOo in the Media", unless the "OOo" is considered to be a > problem here. * Why not: Related Media? Opinions? > Now here are some more editorial comments from me, all very minor: > > (1) In the Download box in the center of the page, make the words > "OpenOffice.org 2.0" larger than the "Free Download" and "Buy CDs" > text. Roger - en route to do. > (2) Change "Upcoming Events" to "Coming Events". Why? I think the former is better. Is there any problem with it? > (3) In the list under "For Developers", use "To Do List" as in > Matthew's > version, not "Todo". Well... I am editing my version... so ;) > (4) Remove the capital "L" from "Linguistic". Done. > - Remove "Download" from "General Links" as there is the "Download" > link on > the tabs and on the froint page it is now the biggest link Hmmm... I think I would still like to have it there. Mainly for other pages on the site. It is also a logical place for it. What do others think? > - The dates seem to have been reverted to the US form - what happened > to put > the 3 letter month name ? My fault. They are now reverted. * Where changed to Location > - how about adding template docs to "Resources" ? As Daniel said, what is a template? > - can the "I-bar" cursor on the drop down menues at the right be > changed to a > "pointer" ? I see what you mean: I'll set it with CSS. > - defintiely add to "For Developers" a "Getting Started" and "Where to > ask > questions" links Good idea... But everything we add, someone needs to write. I'll put it in with provisional terms. I'll play with the box in the center, to make it more like Daniel's again, whilst still having all of the required information. Anything else? Kind Regards, -- Matthew Wardrop <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
