thx!
Fixing as we speak. (the missing space is due to the HTML conversion,
nothing I did wrong :)

Martijn

On Jan 2, 2008 4:08 PM, David Shepherdson <
[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Just a few grammatical/typo things:
>
> On 1 Jan 2008, at 10.28 pm, Martijn Dashorst wrote:
>
> > Apache Wicket 1.3 released
> >
> > The Wicket team wishes everybody a happy new year and starts 2008
> > promising
>
> Maybe that should be 'promisingly'?
>
> ...
>
> > This new release features some considerable improvements over previous
> > releases and stabilizes several coreAPI's. Highlights from this
> > release:
>
> Missing space after 'core'. I would say you don't need an apostrophe
> for 'APIs' (but I realise there is some debate around that... :-)).
>
> ...
>
> >   - simplified models API—the number of Model classes was minimized,
> >   the Component parameter to theget/setObject methods has been removed
>
> Missing space after 'the'.
>
> ...
>
> >   - all URL's are now generated as relative URL's—this means it works
>
> Again, the apostrophes shouldn't be needed on 'URLs'.
>
> ...
>
> >   - simplified validator API—the validator API has been decoupled from
> >   Wicket's form component hierarchy allowing you to create
> > validators so that
> >   validators can be reused outside Wicket
>
> Maybe just '...create validators that can be reused outside WIcket'?
>
> ...
>
> >   markup surrounding a component, <wicket:container> can add
> > components'
> >   markup in places where it would make the page non-w3c compliant
>
> Maybe capitals for 'W3C'?
>
> ...
>
> >   - stateless pages and components for those parts of your application
> >   that needs to scale
>
> Should be 'need' (singular).
>
> ...
>
> > And much more small updates, bug fixes, upgrades and new features.
> > As there
>
> Should be 'And many more...'.
>
> ...
>
> > have been API breaks you will need to do some work on your existing
> > applications to make it 1.3 compliant. This is not a drop-in
> > replacement for
>
> Should be '...to make them 1.3 compliant.'
>
> Hope this helps!
>
> David




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