This patch improves the language in the fcoeadm man page for the '-s|--stats' option to make it more readable.
Signed-off-by: Robert Love <robert.w.l...@intel.com> Tested-by: Ross Brattain <ross.b.bratt...@intel.com> --- doc/fcoeadm.8 | 12 +++++++----- doc/fcoeadm.txt | 12 ++++++------ 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/fcoeadm.8 b/doc/fcoeadm.8 index 2a696b3..6dd6d9b 100644 --- a/doc/fcoeadm.8 +++ b/doc/fcoeadm.8 @@ -2,12 +2,12 @@ .\" Title: fcoeadm .\" Author: [FIXME: author] [see http://docbook.sf.net/el/author] .\" Generator: DocBook XSL Stylesheets v1.76.1 <http://docbook.sf.net/> -.\" Date: 01/30/2012 +.\" Date: 07/20/2012 .\" Manual: Open-FCoE Tools .\" Source: Open-FCoE .\" Language: English .\" -.TH "FCOEADM" "8" "01/30/2012" "Open\-FCoE" "Open\-FCoE Tools" +.TH "FCOEADM" "8" "07/20/2012" "Open\-FCoE" "Open\-FCoE Tools" .\" ----------------------------------------------------------------- .\" * Define some portability stuff .\" ----------------------------------------------------------------- @@ -102,11 +102,13 @@ Show detailed information about the discovered SCSI LUNs associated with the FCo .PP \fB\-s\fR, \fB\-\-stats\fR \fIethX\fR [\fIinterval\fR] .RS 4 -Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE interface on the specified network interface\&. The information will be display in one line on the screen per given time interval\&. +Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE connection on the specified network interface\&. The information will be displayed repeatedly until the user cancels the command\&. The statistics will be printed every specified \fIinterval\fR -should be specified in whole integers greater than 0\&. It specifies the time interval in the unit of seconds\&. If +(in seconds)\&. +\fIinterval\fR +should be specified as a whole number greater than 0\&. If \fIinterval\fR -is not specified, the default interval is one second\&. +is not specified, a default interval of one second is used\&. .RE .PP \fB\-b\fR, \fB\-\-lesb\fR \fIethX\fR [\fIinterval\fR] diff --git a/doc/fcoeadm.txt b/doc/fcoeadm.txt index 4069978..40348ab 100644 --- a/doc/fcoeadm.txt +++ b/doc/fcoeadm.txt @@ -100,12 +100,12 @@ OPTIONS *-s*, *--stats* _ethX_ [_interval_]:: Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE - interface on the specified network interface. - The information will be display in one line on the screen per given - time interval. _interval_ should be specified in whole integers - greater than 0. It specifies the time interval in the unit of - seconds. If _interval_ is not specified, the default interval is - one second. + connection on the specified network interface. The information will + be displayed repeatedly until the user cancels the command. The + statistics will be printed every specified _interval_ (in seconds). + _interval_ should be specified as a whole number greater than 0. + If _interval_ is not specified, a default interval of one second is + used. *-b*, *--lesb* _ethX_ [_interval_]:: Show the Link Error Statistics Block (LESB) of the FCoE connection _______________________________________________ devel mailing list devel@open-fcoe.org https://lists.open-fcoe.org/mailman/listinfo/devel
