Dear all,

I have made a small patch to improve the documentation of the quickstart
guide. Please have a look and let me know what you think.

P.S.: This is my first patch so feel free to let me know if I made any
mistakes.

Regards,
Utkarsh
From 1377d30f47b22133f8514d2525d6390573e181ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Utkarsh Verma <utka...@bitbanged.com>
Date: Thu, 23 Mar 2023 09:13:09 +0530
Subject: [PATCH 0/1] *** Improve coherence of user/start docs ***

This patch improves consistency of the documentation in the user/start
section. In app.rst, absolute path has been removed because the PATH had
already been set appropriately in the previous page, i.e. bsp-buil. In
bsp-build.rst, instructions have been removed for manually creating a
build directory as it is unnecessary. Apart from that, minor grammatical
fixes have been made.

Utkarsh Verma (1):
  bsp-howto: Fix grammar and improve coherence.

 user/start/app.rst       |  2 +-
 user/start/bsp-build.rst | 17 +++++------------
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

-- 
2.40.0

From 1377d30f47b22133f8514d2525d6390573e181ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Utkarsh Verma <utka...@bitbanged.com>
Date: Thu, 23 Mar 2023 09:10:47 +0530
Subject: [PATCH 1/1] bsp-howto: Fix grammar and improve coherence.

---
 user/start/app.rst       |  2 +-
 user/start/bsp-build.rst | 17 +++++------------
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/user/start/app.rst b/user/start/app.rst
index ce9a44d..0599305 100644
--- a/user/start/app.rst
+++ b/user/start/app.rst
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ Run the executable:
 
 .. code-block:: none
 
-    $HOME/quick-start/rtems/@rtems-ver-major@/bin/rtems-run --rtems-bsps=erc32-sis build/sparc-rtems@rtems-ver-major@-erc32/hello.exe
+    rtems-run --rtems-bsps=erc32-sis build/sparc-rtems@rtems-ver-major@-erc32/hello.exe
 
 The output will be something close to:
 
diff --git a/user/start/bsp-build.rst b/user/start/bsp-build.rst
index 8401d71..585d009 100644
--- a/user/start/bsp-build.rst
+++ b/user/start/bsp-build.rst
@@ -99,16 +99,9 @@ If you have built a BSP with the RSB, you can move on to
 Manual BSP Build
 ----------------
 
-We manually build the BSP in four steps.  The first step is to create a build
-directory.  It must be separate from the RTEMS source directory.  We use
-:file:`$HOME/quick-start/build/b-erc32`.
-
-.. code-block:: none
-
-    mkdir -p $HOME/quick-start/build/b-erc32
-
-The second step is to set your path. Prepend the RTEMS tool suite binary
-directory to your ``$PATH`` throughout the remaining steps. Run the command:
+We manually build the BSP in four steps. The first step is to set your path.
+Prepend the RTEMS tool suite binary directory to your ``$PATH`` throughout the
+remaining steps. Run the command:
 
 .. code-block:: none
 
@@ -133,7 +126,7 @@ has not been correctly set. Check the contents of the path
 file cannot be found return to :ref:`QuickStartTools` and install the tools
 again.
 
-The first step is to configure the BSP.  There are various BSP build
+The second step is to configure the BSP.  There are various BSP build
 configuration options available.  Some options are BSP-specific.  Each section
 in the INI-style configuration file ``config.ini`` instructs the build system to
 build a particular BSP variant (`sparc/erc32` in our case).  We enable the build
@@ -179,7 +172,7 @@ by ``$BASE``.
     Checking for program 'xz'                : $BASE/anaconda3/bin/xz
     'configure' finished successfully (0.414s)
 
-Building the BSP is the second step.
+Building the BSP is the third step.
 
 .. code-block:: none
 
-- 
2.40.0

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