On Sun, Feb 18, 2007 at 09:28:38PM +0000, Dave Baker wrote: > On Sunday 18 February 2007 20:10:27 nextgens at freenetproject.org wrote: > > Author: nextgens > > Date: 2007-02-18 20:10:26 +0000 (Sun, 18 Feb 2007) > > New Revision: 11837 > ... > > <div class="infobox"> > > <div class="infobox-header">Next, connect your node to the > network.</div> > > - <p>You will need to get some <abbr title="Darknet is the primary > network on Freenet.">darknet</abbr> (or testnet) connections. If you know > people using Freenet ask them for their noderefs (this is ideal) otherwise > please join us on IRC on <a > href="irc://irc.freenode.net/%23freenet-refs">#freenet-refs</a> on > irc.freenode.net, and we will get you wired in to the network. Note that you > are especially vulnerable to your peers so if you are paranoid you should > only connect to people you trust.</p> > > - <p>To create a link with another node, send them your <a > href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/myref.txt";>noderef</a> and add theirs on > the <a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/";>darknet</a> page. When <b>both > ends</b> have added the other's noderef they should connect. If you are > having difficulties refer to the <a > href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org/FreenetConnections";>Freenet > Connections</a> page on the Freenet Project Wiki.</p> > > + <p>You will need to get some <abbr title="Darknet is the primary > network on Freenet.">darknet</abbr> connections. If you know people using > Freenet ask them for their noderefs (this is ideal) otherwise please join us > on IRC on <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/%23freenet-refs">#freenet-refs</a> > on irc.freenode.net, and we will get you wired in to the network. Note that > you are especially vulnerable to your peers. If you are paranoid you should > only connect to people you trust.</p> > > + <p>To create a link with another node, send them your <a > href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/myref.txt";>noderef</a> and add theirs on > the <a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/";>darknet</a> page. When <b>both > ends</b> have added the other's noderef they should connect. If you are > having difficulties refer to the <a > href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org/FreenetConnections";>Freenet > Connections</a> page on the <a href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org";>Freenet > Project Wiki</a>.</p> > > </div> > > Also, should all this gumf about making connections not go before we talk > about browsing freesites and running frost?
All above looks good, though I dunno about splitting on the "so". It's myref.fref, not myref.txt. Please fix this. > > > <div class="infobox"> > > <div class="infobox-header">Once again thank you for using > Freenet!</div> > > - <p>The Freenet Project employs a full-time developer to produce > this system. If you can, we would appreciate it if could <a > href="http://freenetproject.org/index.php?page=donate";>donate to the > project</a> so that we can continue to employ him.</p> > > + <p>The Freenet Project employs a full-time developer. If you > can, we would appreciate it if could <a > href="http://freenetproject.org/index.php?page=donate";>donate to the > project</a> so that we can continue to employ him and keep on improving our > software.</p> > > + <p>We wish you a pleasant experience in the free world!</p> Looks good. > > Something along the lines of: > > "Remember, Freenet is all about freedom of speech, so you may find content on > Freenet that would be considered offensive or unacceptable in other media. If > this concerns you, then consider carefully what links you trust." > > .. probably wouldn't go amiss either. Something like that yeah. Functions of this warning: - To warn people that indexes/freesites may link to absolutely anything. - To warn people not to visit sites posted by anonymous cowards on Frost (because they are probably goatse, or worse). > > > </div> > > </div> > > </div> > > - <div id="copyright">© Copyright 2007 <a > href="http://freenetproject.org/";>The Freenet Project</a>.</div> > > + <div id="started"> > > + <a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/";>Get started on Freenet!</a> We could keep the copyright notice, maybe replace it with a copyleft notice with a link to the GPL. > > I assume there's some kind of mechanism to replace this if the installer > chose > a different FProxy port? Not that I know of. Is the above displayed by Fproxy or is it on the website? If the former, we can just use a relative link - <a href="/">. > > Other than that, seems good to me, although I'm only reading through the HTML > source right now. > > Dave -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: signature.asc Type: application/pgp-signature Size: 189 bytes Desc: Digital signature URL: <https://emu.freenetproject.org/pipermail/devl/attachments/20070220/cdf7014f/attachment.pgp>
