Matthew Toseland wrote: > On Friday 12 June 2009 21:51:56 Luke771 wrote: > >> Matthew Toseland wrote: >> >>> On Tuesday 09 June 2009 16:50:33 Luke771 wrote: >>> >>> >>>> Matthew Toseland wrote: >>>> >>>> >>>>> On Saturday 06 June 2009 23:12:53 Luke771 wrote: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> Should I file bugs for this kind of stuff? I heard that you were trying >>>>>> to make order in the bug tracker and I don't want to add more mess until >>>>>> the existing mess is sorted out, so I'm posting this kind of stuff here. >>>>>> I would file bugs for trivial stuff such as alternate wordings >>>>>> suggestions, if you guys tell me that it's OK to do so. >>>>>> In the meantime, here's another string that IMHO should be changed: >>>>>> >>>>>> InsertFreesiteToadlet.content3=Once you have downloaded jSite, and >>>>>> constructed your website using an HTML editor such as KompoZer (free) or >>>>>> Dreamweaver (commercial), work through one of the following tutorials >>>>>> which are hosted on Freenet: >>>>>> >>>>>> Never underestimate stupidity! >>>>>> That string make it sound as if users *must* use either Kompozer or >>>>>> Dreamweaver, and a website built, say, manually editing the HTML can't >>>>>> be published on Freenet. >>>>>> >>>>>> (besides, the old version of my FAFS freesite (before the layout switch) >>>>>> were built with Kompozer and when I eventually decided to switch to >>>>>> manual editing I found that the Kompozer-generate HTML was a horrible >>>>>> mess) >>>>>> >>>>>> I suggest to make it "build a site in HTML" without suggesting any app, >>>>>> e.g. >>>>>> >>>>>> InsertFreesiteToadlet.content3=Once you have downloaded jSite and built >>>>>> your website in HTML (CSS is also allowed), follow the instructions from >>>>>> one of the following freesites: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> Not convinced, IMHO any user able to write a website in HTML will >>>>> understand this, no? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>> Sure. And those who might misundertand it as 'must use >>>> kompozer/dreamweaver' can't type html manually anyway. >>>> However, my point is more like 'don't suggest any specific WYSIWYG >>>> editor, just let users find their own. >>>> By the way, do the Freenet Project get paid for promoting Kompozer and >>>> Dreamwaver? >>>> >>>> I know I'm thinking like an 'evil capitalist', but we live in an evil >>>> capitalist world after all, so here's my point: why should we provide >>>> advertising for Kompozer and Dreamweaver? E-mail them and tell them that >>>> we 'could' do that, if we had a good reason to (and don't accept "an >>>> accident could happen..." as an answer) >>>> j/k ;-) >>>> >>>> In the meantime, it would be a better idea (IMHO) to suggest that they >>>> google 'WYSIWYG HTML editor'. >>>> With that in mind, yet another alternative for the string in question >>>> could be: >>>> >>>> InsertFreesiteToadlet.content3=Build a website using HTML and CSS or use >>>> WYSIWYG editors (What You See Is What You Get) that provide user-friendly >>>> interfaces. A web search for WYSIWYG could be a good starting point. Once >>>> built your site, follow the instructions from one of the following >>>> freesites: >>>> >>>> >>>> Note: I did google WYSIWYG and I got lots of good hits, including (of >>>> course) Wikipedia page, other pages with definitions and explanations, >>>> some official sites of particular WYSIWYG editors, and (this is the good >>>> one) some pages with editors reviews , including a 'Best 25 WYSIWYG' >>>> >>>> >>> "WYSIWYG editor" != "WYSIWYG HTML editor". >>> >>> >> So make that 'search for WYSIWYG HTML' >> (BTW my search for WYSIWYS got me almost exclusively HTML editors hit.) >> >> Suggesting one particular product makes the user think that we somehow >> 'want' him to use that product and not a different one. >> > > But it makes life easier for the user. And isn't that what matters? And > giving examples is usually a sensible way to explain things, no? I don't care > about free advertising, I care about making it easy for the end user. Also, > finding good free open source HTML editors is not that easy in my experience, > for Windows everything is shareware or adware and always will be. :| However, > we should probably reorganise it. IMHO most people are lazy, so we should > mention Thingamablog *first* - provided that it works, does it? > > Currently it says: > > "You can anonymously upload a web site to Freenet ("insert a Freesite"). Once > it has been uploaded, it will remain on Freenet for as long as people > continue to access it occasionally. It is distributed across the network and > therefore also available if your computer is turned off. And the most > important fact: If the security level of Freenet has been configured properly > it should be very difficult to find out who has uploaded a Freesite. > > Unfortunately we do not yet have a built-in wizard for inserting freesites. > We suggest you use jSite, this is a GUI tool for inserting freesites. You can > get the latest version of jSite from our web site, or you can get version > 0.6.2 from Freenet (more information). > > Once you have downloaded jSite, and constructed your website using an HTML > editor such as KompoZer (free) or Dreamweaver (commercial), work through one > of the following tutorials which are hosted on Freenet: > > * Publish! - A short tutorial on how to insert freesites > * Freesite HOWTO - Another, longer tutorial on how to insert freesites > > Alternatively, Thingamablog is a user-friendly blog generator, you can > download a Freenet-compatible version here or over Freenet." > > Possible rewrite: > > "You can anonymously upload a web site to Freenet ("insert a Freesite"). Once > it has been uploaded, it will remain on Freenet for as long as people > continue to access it occasionally. It is distributed across the network and > therefore also available if your computer is turned off. And the most > important fact: If the security level of Freenet has been configured properly > it should be very difficult to find out who has uploaded a Freesite. > > The easiest option is to get Thingamablog. This is an application which will > let you create a Freenet blog (a "flog"), and will upload it for you. You can > download a Freenet-compatible version of Thingamablog from our web site here, > or over Freenet here. > > If you want to make something other than a blog, or want to edit the HTML > yourself, you will need to create your web site in a WYSIWYG HTML editor such > as KompoZer. Currently we do not have a built-in tool for inserting > freesites, so you should get jSite from here, or from Freenet (more > information about jSite). Work through one of the following tutorials which > are hosted on Freenet: > > * Publish! - A short tutorial on how to insert freesites > * Freesite HOWTO - Another, longer tutorial on how to insert freesites > " >
Looks like you really want to name at least one product. OK then. The possible rewrite that you posted is better then the current one IMO. (even better with a link to the FAFS jSite page (next FAFS update is going to be uploaded soon)