Am Dienstag, 16. Juni 2009 19:52:32 schrieb Matthew Toseland:
> Okay. The homepage now says:
> ' Freenet is free software which lets you anonymously share files, browse
> and publish web sites, and chat on forums, without fear of censorship.
> Users are anonymous, and Freenet is entirely decentralised. Without
> anonymity there can never be true freedom of speech, and without
> decentralisation the network would be vulnerable to attack. Learn more!
The last part shouldn't be in negative form, I think. Her's an alternative:
"Its anonymity gives you true freedom of speech and its decentralization makes
it resistant against attacks."
Also I wouldn't use a "," before "and chat on forums (it breaks the text
flow).
How about this:
' Freenet is free software which lets you anonymously share files, chat on
forums and browse and publish web sites without fear of censorship. Users are
anonymous, and Freenet is entirely decentralised. Through anonymity it gives
you true freedom of speech and its decentralization makes it resistant against
attacks. Learn more!'
Best wishes,
Arne
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Ein Mann wird auf der Stra?e mit einem Messer bedroht.
Zwei Polizisten sind sofort da und halten ein Transparent davor.
"Illegale Szene. Niemand darf das sehen."
Der Mann wird ausgeraubt, erstochen und verblutet,
denn die Polizisten haben beide H?nde voll zu tun.
Willkommen in Deutschland. Zensur ist sch?n.
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