MIURA Masahiro Wrote:

> Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
> > http://www.reddit.com/r/programming/comments/975ng/diving_into_the_d_programming_language_tdpl/
> >  
> 
> Thanks for sharing it!
> 
> Typos: in section 1.1, there are inchPerFoot's and inchperfoot's.

And, of course, the same goes for cmperinch's.

Some other observations are the following:

In section 1.2 you refer to prior "if" statements introduced in above samples, 
what samples? is there maybe a 0 chapte?r

In section 1.4, subsection "Building a Vocabulary" it's not very clear what 
stdio.byLine is... I mean, it says nothing about how to feed the text to the 
program. Also in subsection "Counting Frequencies. Lambda Functions" there 
appears a call to "splitter" function, isn't it named "split" instead? Besides 
the hamlet.txt URL doesn't work already, maybe a bit of indirection here would 
also be appreciated...

In section 1.5, maybe I miss the reason of importing "std.range".

In section 1.6, "stats" is a variable and stats.d is the name of the 
file/module, shouldn't stats.d be renamed to stat.d so that "stat.Max" makes 
sense and so the name of the program becomes stat and it's invoked that way in 
the command line? Or maybe rename "stat.Max" to "stats.Max"? Besides, aren't 
you talking firstly about Min? Why not to illustrate the thing with "stat.Min" 
instead of "stat.Max"?

In the references to different other chapters the word sometimes appears 
capitalized and sometimes doesn't.

Cheers!

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