`It is obvious that you took time and care to review the article.`

`Thank you very much!`

On Sunday, 11 June 2017 at 00:40:23 UTC, Nicholas Wilson wrote:

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Maybe its the default rendering but the open math font is hardto read as the sub scripts get vertically compressed.My suggestions:Distinguish between the likelihood functions for gamma andnormal rather than calling them both L(x). Maybe L subscriptuppercase gamma and L subscript N?

Good idea!

Links to wikipedia for the technical terms (e.g. dispersion,chi squared, curvature), again the vertical compression of themath font does not help here (subscripts of fractions) . Itwill expand your audience if they don't get lost in theintroduction!

`Yes I should definitely add clarification references. I should`

`probably also add that curvature is also the Hessian, however I`

`recently developed a dislike for calling mathematical constructs`

`after people or odd names I was serious thinking about calling`

`Newton-Raphson something else but that might be taking it too far.`

`I'll end up writing the final in html so I can add a decent html`

`latex package to modify the size of the equations.`

Speaking of not losing your audience: give a link to the NRAand/or a brief explanation of how it generalises to higherdimensions (graph or animation for the 2D case would be good,perhaps take something from wikipedia)

NRA? Don't understand that acronym with reference to the article.

`I shall mention the generalisation of the equations over multiple`

`observations.`

`I agree that there is a danger of loosing the audience and`

`perhaps some graphics would be nice.`

I dont think it is necessary to show the signature of the BLASand Lapacke function, just a short description and link shouldsuffice. also any reason you don't use GLAS?

True

I would just have gParamCalcs as its own function (unless youare trying to show off that particular feature of D).

`I think its easier to use mixin in since the same code is`

`required since mu and k are used in gLogLik, gGradient,`

`gCurvature and xB is also used in gLogLik. Showing off the use of`

`mixins is also a plus.`

omit the parentheses of .array() and .reduce()

Yes

You use .array a lot: how much of that is necessary? I dontthink it is in zip(k.repeat().take(n).array(), x, y, mu)

Yes, I should remove the points where .array() is not necessary

`return(curv);` should be `return curve;`

Thanks that's my R bleeding into my D! So should be: return curv;

Any reason you don't square the tolerance rather than sqrt theparsDiff?

`The calculation is the L2 norm which ends in sqrt later used for`

`the stopping criterion as in the equation`

for(int i = 0; i < nepochs; ++i) => foreach(i; iota(epochs))?

hmm potato

zip(pars, x).map!(a => a[0]*a[1]).reduce!((a, b) => a + b);=>dot(pars,x)?

`Fair point. When I started writing the article I considered`

`attempting to write the whole thing in D functional style - with`

`no external libraries. In the end I didn't want to write a matrix`

`inverse in functional style so I rolled it back somewhat and`

`started adding C calls which is more sensible.`

Theres a lot of code and text, some images and graphs would benice, particularly in combination with a more real worldexample use case.

`I would agree that the article does need be less austere -`

`however the article is about the GLM algorithm rather than its`

`uses. I think the analyst should know whether they need a GLM or`

`not - there are many sources that explain applications of GLM - I`

`could perhaps reference some.`

Factor out code like a[2].repeat().take(a[1].length) to afunction, perhaps use some more BLAS routines for things like.map!( a => zip(a[0].repeat().take(a[1].length), a[1], a[2].repeat().take(a[1].length), a[3].repeat().take(a[1].length)) .map!(a => -a[2]*(a[0]/a[3])*a[1]) .array()) .array(); to make it more obvious what the calculation is doing.

Yes

It might not be the point of the article but it would be goodto show some performance figures, I'm sure optimisation tipswill be forthcoming.

`Since I am using whatever cblas algorithm is installed I'm not`

`sure that benchmarks would really mean much. Ilya raised a good`

`point about the amount of copying I am doing - as I was writing`

`it I thought so too. I address this below.`

Thanks again for taking time to review the article!

`My main take way from writing this article is that it would be`

`quite straightforward to write a small GLM package in D - I'd use`

`quite a different approach with structs/classes GLM objects to`

`remove the copying issues and to give a consistent interface to`

`the user.`

`An additional takeaway for me was that I also found the use of`

`array operations like`

a[] = b[]*c[] or d[] -= e[] -f

`created odd effects in my calculations the outputs were wrong and`

`for ages I didn't know why but later ended up removing those`

`expressions from the code all together - which remedied the`

`problem.`