On Mon, Feb 9, 2009 at 3:33 PM, Kevin Donovan <[email protected]> wrote:
> Meaningful feedback still welcome. It's clear, informative and it flows well. Minor suggestions: 1. massive -> unprecedented 9. 1 -> a single 9. public-at-large -> public 10. Under the secretive -> Under secretive 10. Is it worth mentioning Lessig's "code as law" here? 11. Is it worth mentioning the irony of the DMCA being free speech's friend here? 18. *Why* are ISPs doing this? 18. disagree -> will leave them if they do this 19. miscarried -> subverted, bypassed, 19. http://www.guardian.co.uk/technology/2008/apr/09/bit.torrent "a network that also provides freedom of the press, freedom of assembly and freedom of speech, all down one wire" - Rob. _______________________________________________ Discuss mailing list [email protected] http://freeculture.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/discuss
