Hi Dan, Thanks for taking time to contribute this document! Here is some feed-back:
1) The title The title makes me feel like you will cover the various ways to integrate AJAX with Restlet where you in fact focus on one approach based on Prototype. You could mention GWT, Dojo, etc. You should either adjust the title or cover other approaches in sufficient details. 2) Explain architecture/design I feel like you jump too fast on the example code, without explaining what you are actually building and the main design decisions. 3) Source code comments I think that you should interleave the source code with more explanations. You should also reduce the source code to focus on the most interesting bits and keep the rest in the attachments. Also, I fixed a few typos and wordings along the way :) Here is the link again: http://wiki.restlet.org/docs_1.1/g1/43-restlet/52-restlet.html Best regards, Jerome > -----Message d'origine----- > De : cleverpig [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Envoyé : mercredi 13 février 2008 07:02 > À : [email protected] > Objet : I had finished "Using Ajax in Restlet" draft,pls review > > I post this draft in wiki.restlet.org--"Using AJAX in > Restlet":http://wiki.restlet.org/docs_1.1/g1/43-restlet/52-res > tlet.html > > I will start this tutorial with a simply example-"microblog",that's a > text based micro blog for demo how to using AJAX in Restlet. > Demo construction: > * Web client: call background service via JSON protocol in full > REST way(GET/PUT/POST/DELETE). > * Server side: uses db4o to work as store service provider,and > expose data in RESTful way. > * Server handle process: Application dispatch request to > Router,Router find corresponding reource,Resource handle request and > return representation. > > Pls make review and point out drawback. > -- > cleverpig > Location: Beijing > Address: Room 4018,No.A2 South Avenue Fuxingmen Beijing,P.R.China > Zipcode: 100031 > Phone: 010-66415588-1113 > MSN: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > QQ: 149291732 > Skepe: cleverpigatmatrix > My Facebook ID:cleverpig > My Blog: hihere.sohu.com > My Tags: del.icio.us/cleverpig > My Twitter: twitter.com/cleverpig > My Organization: www.beijing-open-party.org > 一些值得关注的唧歪: > http://jiwai.de/t/jmatrix/ > http://jiwai.de/t/db4o/ > http://jiwai.de/t/matrix-community/ >
