On 2 January 2015 at 16:14, Vladimir Diaz <[email protected]> wrote: > There's a lot of background documentation and technical details excluded > from the PEPs (to avoid turning the PEP into a 15+ page behemoth), but I do > agree that we should explicitly cover some of these implementation details > in PEP 458. Subsections on the exact format of metadata, explanation on how > metadata is signed, and how the roles are "delegated" with the library, > still remain. As Paul as indicated, terminology can also be improved so as > to be more readable for "non-experts."
There's a tension here, in that while the detail is useful, the non-expert content needs to be *less* words, not more - the problem is one of an intimidating wall of text, much more than that the concepts are difficult. Adding more content, however necessary it is to the implementation side, probably detracts here. Just as an example, take the first paragraph of the abstract: """ This PEP proposes how the Python Package Index (PyPI [1] ) should be integrated with The Update Framework [2] (TUF). TUF was designed to be a flexible security add-on to a software updater or package manager. The framework integrates best security practices such as separating role responsibilities, adopting the many-man rule for signing packages, keeping signing keys offline, and revocation of expired or compromised signing keys. For example, attackers would have to steal multiple signing keys stored independently to compromise a role responsible for specifying a repository's available files. Another role responsible for indicating the latest snapshot of the repository may have to be similarly compromised, and independent of the first compromised role. """ There's no way I, even with the benefit of the discussions both on the list here and off-list, can skim that sentence and get anything more meaningful than "blah, blah, blah" from it. Taking a moment to think about it is fine, but at that point you've lost me (in terms of encouraging me to read the document, rather than just debate based on what I think it's going to say). None of the "best security practices" mentioned in sentence 3 mean anything to me - they all basically look like "do more security stuff" to me, and "doing security stuff" unfortunately, from my experience, translates to "jump through annoying hoops that stop me getting my job done"... Similarly, the last 2 sentences (the example) read as saying "attackers have to work harder". Well good, I'd sort of hope the PEP provided a benefit of some sort :-) The following (somewhat off the cuff) may work better: """ This PEP proposes some changes to the Python Package Index (PyPI) infrastructure to enhance its resistance to attack without requiring any changes in workflow from project authors. It is similar to recent changes to use TLS for all PyPI traffic, but offers additional security over TLS. Future PEPs may look at further security enhancements that could require additional action from project authors, but this PEP is restricted to the PyPI infrastructure and mirroring software. """ Sorry for what is pretty much a hatchet job on a single paragraph take out of context from the PEP, but hopefully you can see what I'm trying to say - skip details of security concepts, attack vectors, etc, and concentrate on "we're making things better - it's as low impact as the change to TLS - project authors won't need to do anything (at this stage)". Those are the key messages to get across straight away. A few more paragraphs in the abstract explaining in non-technical terms what's being done and why, and you're done. You can say "the rest of the document is the technical details for people with an understanding of (or interest in) the security concepts" and get on with the specifics. If you can get the non-specialists to read just the abstract section, and go away knowing they are happy to let the expects get on with the process, you've won. Put the details and the scary terms in the "for experts and interested parties only" main body. Paul. _______________________________________________ Distutils-SIG maillist - [email protected] https://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/distutils-sig
