#25355: Two changes in the documentation for docs/topics/db/aggregation.txt
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     Reporter:  mzaanen        |      Owner:  nobody
         Type:  Uncategorized  |     Status:  new
    Component:  Documentation  |    Version:  1.8
     Severity:  Normal         |   Keywords:
 Triage Stage:  Unreviewed     |  Has patch:  0
Easy pickings:  0              |      UI/UX:  0
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 Lines 75/76 say:
 //# All the following queries involve traversing the Book<->Publisher
 # many-to-many relationship backward//

 I think this should be:
 //# All the following queries involve traversing the Book<->Publisher
 # foreign key relationship backward//


 Lines 243-245 say:
 //The same rules apply to the ``aggregate()`` clause. If you wanted to
 know the lowest and highest price of any book that is available for sale
 in a store, you could use the aggregate:://

 I think "in any of the stores" would be better than "in a store".

 Kind regards.

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