#11501: Grammatical error
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 Reporter:  pzero          |       Owner:  nobody    
   Status:  new            |   Milestone:            
Component:  Uncategorized  |     Version:  1.0       
 Keywords:  grammar        |       Stage:  Unreviewed
Has_patch:  0              |  
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 Tutorial Page 2:

 The Django admin is powered by Django itself, and its interfaces use
 Django's own template system. (How meta!)

 Should be:

 The Django admin is powered by Django itself, and its interfaces use
 Django's own template system—how meta!

 The em dash (—), or m dash, m-rule, etc., often demarcates a parenthetical
 thought—like this one—or some similar interpolation. Parentheses can be
 used, however it would be rare. If parentheses are applied correctly to
 the offending statement, it should look like this;

 The Django admin is powered by Django itself, and its interfaces use
 Django's own template system (how meta!)

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Ticket URL: <http://code.djangoproject.com/ticket/11501>
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