#14221: Mashed Sentences in Doc
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 Reporter:  Grant <[email protected]>  |       Owner:  nobody    
   Status:  new                          |   Milestone:            
Component:  Uncategorized                |     Version:  1.2       
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Has_patch:  0                            |  
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 http://docs.djangoproject.com/en/1.2/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial/

 The introduction section says this:

 "This tutorial is going to guide you through guide the user through the
 creation of a geographic web application for viewing the world borders.
 [1] Some of the code used in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired
 by the GeoDjango basic apps project. [2]"

 Looks like the start of two sentences in one.  :)  Probably should be
 something like this:

 "This tutorial is going to guide you through the creation of a geographic
 web application for viewing the world borders. [1] Some of the code used
 in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired by the GeoDjango basic apps
 project. [2]"

 Grant

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