On Wed, Aug 1, 2018 at 10:14 AM, Ken O'Driscoll <ken=40wemonitoremail.com@ dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > Apologies if this has already been caught by others. > > Just spotted some small typos in section 8. Was reading this specific > section in connection with something GDPR (the fun!) related. > > 8. Privacy Considerations > > The Authenticated Received Chain provides a verifiable record of the > handlers for a message. This record may include Personally > Identifiable Information such as IP address and domain names. Such > information is also including in existing header fields such as the > "Received" header field. > > > a) Suggest "IP addresses" to match plural for "domain names" or make it "an > IP address". > > b) Replace "including" with "included" because it's grammatically > incorrect. > > c) Suggest "exiting non-ARC related header fields" to distinguish that > these are absolutely nothing to do with the protocol. It may be obvious to > us but not to those who may discount implementation because they think it > adds new risk. > Thanks for these catches; all suggested changes have been made. > > Ken. > > _______________________________________________ > dmarc mailing list > dmarc@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmarc >
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