I went ahead and committed my changes. I hope these small changes are helpful.
Neil On Sat, Aug 27, 2022 at 9:12 PM John R Levine <[email protected]> wrote: > If you're feeling really enterprising you can do a github pull request, > but sending the suggested changes to this list is fine. > > On Sat, 27 Aug 2022, Neil Anuskiewicz wrote: > > > Cool! I'll proofread the whole document within two weeks unless there's a > > tighter timeline. I've heard talk on the list about rounding the bend on > > the last lap to the finish. > > > > In addition to proofreading, I'd rewrite for clarity here and there. > Then, > > of course, you could reject any of it. > > > > How exactly would I submit my proposed changes? Thanks. > > > > Neil > > > > On Sat, Aug 27, 2022 at 7:14 PM John Levine <[email protected]> wrote: > > > >> Thanks, we can always use more proofreading. I'll put those in the next > >> pull request. > >> > >> > >> It appears that Neil Anuskiewicz <[email protected]> said: > >>> -=-=-=-=-=- > >>> > >>> I'm not sure if minor things like misspellings, grammar, and other > >> minutia > >>> are useful. I figured I'd try to contribute in a small way. If these > kinds > >>> of suggestions are useful, let me know, and I can do more in the future > >> and > >>> maybe dive into slightly more. > >>> > >>> 1. Introduction says: > >>> > >>> Abusive email often includes unauthorized and deceptive use of a domain > >>> name in the "From" *heaader* field defined in [RFC5322] and *refered* > to > >> as > >>> RFC5322.From. > >>> > >>> It should say: > >>> > >>> Abusive email often includes unauthorized and deceptive use of a domain > >>> name in the "From" *header* field defined in [RFC5322] and *referred* > to > >> as > >>> RFC5322.From. > >>> > >>> 6. DMARC Feedback > >>> > >>> When Domain Owners can see what effect their policies and practices are > >>> having, they are *better* willing and able to use quarantine and reject > >>> policies. > >>> > >>> It should say: > >>> > >>> When Domain Owners can see what effect their policies and practices are > >>> having, they are *more* willing and able to use quarantine and reject > >>> policies. > >>> > >>> 7. Changes from RFC 7489 says: > >>> > >>> This section will summarize *thos* changes. > >>> > >>> It should say: > >>> > >>> This section will summarize *those* changes. > >>> > >>> Thanks. > >>> > >>> Neil > >>> > >>> -=-=-=-=-=- > >>> [Alternative: text/html] > >>> -=-=-=-=-=- > >> > >> > >> > > > > Regards, > John Levine, [email protected], Taughannock Networks, Trumansburg NY > "I dropped the toothpaste", said Tom, crestfallenly. >
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