On 12/2/25 03:34, Alessandro Vesely wrote:

That was the wording proposed by Marco Tiloca
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dmarc-failure-reporting-20-artart-lc-tiloca-2025-11-26/

I chose the first alternative he proposed, as it makes explicit the concerns associated with sending these reports to an external destination, thus allowing the reader to assess the extent to which they are dispelled by the verification described in the protocol.  I understand, however, that it may seem awkward.  Marco probably thought so too, so much so that he proposed a second alternative, "This prevents a bad actor from publishing ...", which is even smoother than the one you proposed.

Further thoughts?
I'm aware, and of course defer if Marco or the other reviewers have concerns.

If you prefer to use the "This prevents..." option that's fine, but for agreement change the following sentence to something like: "This also prevents a Domain Owner from unilaterally publishing a DMARC Policy Record..."

It also introduces a tense/agreement issue (send -> sending), so -- meh, here's a suggestion for the whole paragraph:

"This prevents a bad actor from publishing a DMARC Policy Record requesting that failure reports be sent to an external destination, then deliberately sending messages that will generate failure reports as a form of abuse. This also prevents a Domain Owner from unilaterally publishing a DMARC Policy Record with an external destination for failure reports, forcing the external destination to deal with unwanted messages and potential privacy issues."


Thanks,
--S.

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