Dear all,
I am also in favour of WG adoption of the draft since it discusses very
detailed motivation, problems, and requirements of DMM approach.
To the authors: I propose to take in to consideration correction of some very
minor nits as follows in the next version:
Page 6:
In Fig. 1 beside LMA/MAG for PMIP also a FA is shown with MIPv6 referenced -
shouldn't this be then the MN directly?
[Paper-New.Perspective] is not referenced
Page 7:
mobility management functional blocks can be groups => mobility management
functional blocks can be grouped
will retrieve the location information of an MN is stored. => will retrieve the
stored location information of an MN./will retrieve the location information of
an MN which is stored in the table.
Page 8:
deployment in Section 4 => deployment in Section 3.1
Page 9:
a stable IP home IP address => a stable IP home address / a stable home IP
address
Page 10:
dmm => DMM (3 times)
Page 11:
O-PS2: Complicated deployment with too many variants and extensions
of MIP Deployment is complicated with many variants and
extensions of MIP. When introducing new functions which may
add to the complicity, existing solutions are more vulnerable
=>
O-PS2: Complicated deployment with too many variants and extensions
of MIP
Deployment is complicated with many variants and extensions of
MIP. When introducing new functions which may add to the
complexity, existing solutions are more vulnerable
Best regards
Dirk
Von: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] Im Auftrag von jouni
korhonen
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 20. Juni 2012 10:52
An: [email protected]
Cc: [email protected]
Betreff: [DMM] WG Call for adoption: draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02
Folks,
We have a good start with the requirements document in
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02
and the chairs think it is time to catch up with the
charter regarding the Solution Requirements. We are a bit
ahead purposely so that we have one official document to
work on and discuss before the face to face meeting in
Vancouver.
This email starts a 2-week consensus call on adopting
Title : Requirements of distributed mobility management
Author(s) : H Anthony Chan
Filename : draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02.txt
Pages : 16
Date : 2012-06-14
as a DMM WG document. Please, read the current revision and state
you opinion either for or against adoption (and with reasoning why)
in the mailing list. The call for adoption ends 4th July 2012.
- Jouni & Julien
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