My concern is partially addressed, yes.
There is still this text which can be improved:
- Session-lasting IP Address
A session-lasting IP address is an address assigned to the mobile
host by the network [...]
A session-lasting IP address is an address formed in conjunction by the
host and the network (SLAAC), or assigned by the network (DHCP) [...]
A session-lasting IP prefix is a prefix advertised to the mobile host by
the network [...]
Alex
Le 30/06/2016 à 19:05, Jouni Korhonen a écrit :
Seil, Alex,
Have your concerns been addressed in the -06 revision?
- Jouni
6/30/2016, 2:20 AM, Moses, Danny kirjoitti:
Hi,
I have posted a new version of the OnDemand Mobility draft:
_draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-06_
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility/>.
This new version includes some text editing according to the comments
from Seil and change of classification from the Standard track to
Informational.
Please support it (those who have not cast their support yet).
Thanks,
/Danny
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