Hi, both changes look good to me.
Mirja > Am 06.03.2017 um 03:13 schrieb Z.W. Yan <[email protected]>: > > Hello, Mirja, > Thank you for the review and comments on this draft, please check my in-line > responses below. > > > 2017-03-06 > Z.W. Yan > 发件人： Mirja_Kühlewind > 发送时间： 2017-03-01 02:08:21 > 收件人： The IESG > 抄送： draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum; dmm-chairs; dmm; max.ldp > 主题： [DMM] > Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06:_(with_COMMENT) > Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06: No Objection > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum/ > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > This document has a 2119 boilerplate but doesn't use normative language. > I think it would actually be good to use normative language! > Minor questions: > - secion 4: "This temporary binding should only be used for the downwards > packet transmission" > By downward you mean 'to the MN', right? > Why is this? Does that actually help in any scenario? > *** You are right, the presentaion "This temporary binding > should only be used for the downwards packet transmission and the LMA > should stop broadcasting the routing information about the old HNP if > the old HNP is no longer anchored at this LMA." may cause confusion and it > will be revised as "And the LMA > MUST stop broadcasting the routing information about the old HNP if > the old HNP is no longer anchored at this LMA." > > - I'm not sure why section 3 is titled 'PMIPv6 Extensions'...? > *** Is "HNP Renumbering Procedure" better? > _______________________________________________ > dmm mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm
