The atmospheric pads are great, a kind of weird twisted 80's thing.

The faster drums, I'm not sure if I missed the point.  a.) they sound too
drum machinery b.) the rhythm doesn't really flow .... sorry if I missed the
point.

The drums at the start are interesting, there's nothing much wrong those,
very IDM.  Maybe you should work on those through out the tune.

The bassline doesn't work for me, I'm not sure it should follow the paddy
chords so closely, make it work more with the drums.

The sax licks and synth FX are good.



Sorry, just not my ting.


Scott







> > OK, I have such a backlog of material that I can no longer be so
> >protective of my music. Here is a track intended for my first album (no,
> >not *that* one) started Aug. 29 2000. It's one of my favourites,
> and I think
> >it shows my musical playfulness. I referred to this track in _Rhythm and
> >Harmony_, and is noteworthy technically because it changes tempo
> after the
> >intro (96 BPM to 168.) I'd really like to hear what you think of it.
>
>  Whoops, that's at:
>
>  http://www.nr.infi.net/~tagutcow/PIE.mp3
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