Not bad at all. Towards the end of the track it picks up some real energy, I like that.
The kick drum is far too flabby and uncontrolled, cut down the release. There's something about the overall clarity, I think you need to chip away at some of the frequencies of the various parts, so they sit better in the mix ... rather than add EQ. cheers Scott > -----Original Message----- > From: . evan . [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]] > Sent: 04 May 2002 02:18 > To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List > Subject: [dnb-prod] Re: new shit from titts. - FULL+UPDATED! > > > Yo jesse.... > > I've had this post saved for a while, and I finally checked the track... > > I like the intro, but I'm thinkin the release on the bassdrum is a little > long... if it were a bit more short and snappy it wouldn't fill > up so much > low end... then you could work in a sub bass sound or bassline instead of > the tribal thumping of the bd... unless that's what you're going for... > > the synthline you break into at the first break is tight as > hell... maybe a > little filter sweeping on the first part of it?? > > the way the drums come in is a little weak... maybe another hi > hat line to > emphasize the change between the breakdown and main break? > > I like the song, but I think you could rework the structure and > some of the > fills to add energy... I'd love a hand at a remix of this, or > just a slight > reworking if there was some way for me to get the raw tracks... > you be down? > Lemme know.... > > Evan > > > >From: "Jesse Tittsworth" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > >Reply-To: "Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List" > ><[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > >To: "Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > >Subject: [dnb-prod] new shit from titts. - FULL+UPDATED! > >Date: Tue, 23 Apr 2002 18:37:11 -0400 > > > >Thanks to everyone who took the time to listen and comment. Here's the > >full > >deal (well, thus far). I've up'ed the drums as recommended.. I also took > >the track a slightly different direction for the second break. > I'd love to > >hear your comments.. > > > >http://www.tittsworth.com/newshit2.mp3 > > > >peace, > >tittsworth > > > >_________________________________________________________________ > >MSN Photos is the easiest way to share and print your photos: > >http://photos.msn.com/support/worldwide.aspx > > > > > >--- > >Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk > >You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > >To unsubscribe send a blank email to > >[EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > EVANCIPATION > WWW.MP3.COM/EVANCIPATION > > > _________________________________________________________________ > MSN Photos is the easiest way to share and print your photos: > http://photos.msn.com/support/worldwide.aspx > > > --- > Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk > You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > To unsubscribe send a blank email to > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > --- Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [email protected] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
