It's a little on the long side but that doesn't hurt it. ;) But, being that this is on the long side, I think this tune could benefit from a little drum variation - just more frequent periodic variation in drum patterns (specifically hats). I think if you added another element in at the drop it would add to this tune as well.
The one thing that felt a little out of place was that guitar melody. It seems a little too "solid" of a sound for the rest of the tune which is really pretty atmospheric... and as far as the melody goes... I think maybe something a bit more elusive and lilting as opposed to simple and upfront would fit better with this. Maybe try messing with some simple arpeggiation, with more variation in melodic arrangement between repetitions. Overall though man, I think you and Talon should definitely work together more... your styles go hand in hand very well. Sounding really nice. :) I foresee some dope shit!! Keep up the good work! ~Andy > -----Original Message----- > From: Chris Cisneros [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Sunday, March 30, 2003 9:03 PM > To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List > Subject: [dnb-prod] Magnafide & Talon - Fortnight > > > new music ! magnafide from north los angeles, talon > from denver.. smooth rolling styles.. let us know what > you think.. > > http://phrantek.com/magna/magnafide_and_talon-fortnight.mp3 > > thanks!! > > __________________________________________________ > Do you Yahoo!? > Yahoo! Platinum - Watch CBS' NCAA March Madness, live on your desktop! > http://platinum.yahoo.com > > --- > Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk > You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > To unsubscribe send a blank email to > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > --- Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
