Hi Bob,

Here is the list of changes

   2.  Introduction   . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4

     2.1.  Overview of CGA-TSIG/e Mechanisms  . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
   - Introduction section: added explanation to DNS privacy problem and
   reference to DNS privacy problem statement document, removed problem
   statement section since it is already mentioned in introduction. Removed 
terminology and instead add reference to existing DNS terminology draft

-    Overview of CGA-TSIG algorithm section: explaining different operations in 
via questions and answers to point the readers to the main functions.



  12.  Appendix  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26
   - Appendix section: moved FQDN and PTR scenario to appendix section in other 
supported scenario.



     4.1.  CGA-TSIG   . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
   - CGA-TSIG section: removed IP tag, old signature and old public key. 
Removed the text about DNS update



    4.2.  CGA-TSIGe  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
   - CGA-TSIGe section: removed IP tag, old signature and old public key.

Thanks for asking,
Best,
Hosnieh


From: dns-privacy [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Bob Harold
Sent: Friday, February 27, 2015 4:14 PM
To: Hosnieh Rafiee
Cc: [email protected]
Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] invitation for review

Hosnieh,
     Rather than rereading the whole document, could you tell us which sections 
changed?  Or submit it, so we can look at the diff ?

--
Bob Harold

On Thu, Feb 26, 2015 at 10:53 AM, Hosnieh Rafiee 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Hi,

I did a major update on some sections of CGA-TSIG document. I haven't yet 
upload it on the IETF server. First I would like to know the general feeling 
about the new update before I submit it. Therefore, I invite you to review the 
document and share your inputs.
You can find the document in the following link.

< http://editor.rozanak.com/show.aspx?u=AZCDD03D4DBABD14DA80CDTAM >

Thanks,
Best,
Hosnieh

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