> On 11 Jul 2019, at 16:06, Bob Harold <[email protected]> wrote: > > > 4.1. AXFR Mechanism > > "zone is update to date" > > "update to" -> "up to" > > 4.2. > > "forth step" -> "fourth step" (in several places) > > 4.3. Data Leakage of NOTIFY and SOA Message Exchanges > > "This section attempts to presents a rationale" > > "presents" -> “present"
Thanks for spotting those! > > > 6.2. TLS > > Not sure that these are the right words. "surveillance" to me implies a > passive watching. Which means: > "passive surveillance" - is redundant, and > "active surveillance" - is a contradiction in terms. > I assume that "active" means sending packets to try to confuse the server or > client, which I would call an "attack" and not "surveillance". > Or am I wrong? I think you are right, using ‘attack’ here would be more correct - will update. Sara.
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