Hi All, So the -04 update attempts to address as many of the comments as possible that arose during IETF LC along the lines Eric suggested. The change log is:
* Tsvart review: Add reference to DNS-over-QUIC, fix typo. * Secdir review: Add text in Section 3 on devices using many networks. Update bullet in 3.4.1 on cellular encryption. * Section 3.5.1.1 - re-work the section to try to address multiple comments. * Section 3.5.1.4 - remove this section as now covered by 3.5.1.1. * Section 3.5.1.5.2 - Remove several paragraphs and more directly reference RFC8484 by including bullet points quoting text from Section 8.2 of RFC8484. Retain the last 2 paragraphs as they are information for users, not implementors. * Section 3.4.2 - some minor updates made based on specific comments. If there are still concerns about the content then I would be very grateful at this stage if folks could propose specific text to address issues so we can more quickly move forward. Regards Sara. > On 16 Jan 2020, at 12:15, [email protected] wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF. > > Title : DNS Privacy Considerations > Authors : Stephane Bortzmeyer > Sara Dickinson > Filename : draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt > Pages : 28 > Date : 2020-01-16 > > Abstract: > This document describes the privacy issues associated with the use of > the DNS by Internet users. It is intended to be an analysis of the > present situation and does not prescribe solutions. This document > obsoletes RFC 7626. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > dns-privacy mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
