On Mon, May 4, 2020 at 10:11 AM <internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF. > > Title : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators > Authors : Sara Dickinson > Benno J. Overeinder > Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij > Allison Mankin > Filename : draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt > Pages : 43 > Date : 2020-05-04 > > Abstract: > This document presents operational, policy, and security > considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to > offer DNS Privacy services. With these recommendations, the operator > can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide, > and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users. > > This document also presents a framework to assist writers of a DNS > Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to DNS Security > Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice Statements described > in RFC6841). > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 > > Thanks for the update. Some comments.
7.1.1. Definition of the Trust model "overtime" > "over time" 7.1.2. Trust Model Bootstrapping The whole first paragraph is difficult to parse - it does not seem like complete sentences. 7.2.2. Automated Trust Anchor Check "to to" > "to" But the sentence does not seem complete. -- Bob Harold
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