> On Jul 1, 2020, at 9:09 AM, Brian Haberman <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sara,
> 
> On 7/1/20 5:00 AM, Sara Dickinson wrote:
>> 
>> 
>>> On 28 Jun 2020, at 19:44, Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
>>> draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-10: Discuss
>>> 
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> DISCUSS:
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> 
>>> Trimmed to the one outstanding point from my original DISCUSS:
>>> 
>>> I do not think item #5 in Section 6.1.2 belongs in this document. I don't 
>>> see
>>> how it is within scope for the IETF to be specifying these sorts of best
>>> practices, which are not technical or operational in nature but focus on 
>>> legal
>>> matters and likely require the involvement of lots of lawyers in order to 
>>> get
>>> the provisions written. This section implies that the DROP documents would
>>> become legal/compliance documents by nature, which may or may not be a good
>>> choice but is not within the remit of the IETF to specify. Also, I think 
>>> what
>>> this section asks for is not the norm today and therefore it seems odd for 
>>> the
>>> IETF to specify a best practice that operators may not have any chance of 
>>> being
>>> able to comply with (e.g., listing specific law enforcement agencies, 
>>> privacy
>>> laws, or countries where data centers will reside and the data will never 
>>> move
>>> from them).
>> 
>> After discussion amongst the authors, we are very keen to at least retain a 
>> placeholder within the DROP statement so that readers can easily access any 
>> complimentary documents that do deal with such matters. We would like to 
>> propose replacing item 5 with the following text: 
>> 
>> “5. Data Processing. This section can optionally communicate links to and 
>> the high level contents of any separate statements the operator has 
>> published which cover applicable data processing legislation or agreements 
>> with regard to the location(s) of service provision. "
>> 
> 
> So, the intent is to specify a place for providers to make optional
> statements relevant to their operations, correct? If so, that seems
> reasonable to me.
> 
> Alissa?

WFM. Thanks!
Alissa

> 
> I would suggest making sure the example in the Appendix aligns with this
> change.
> 
> Regards,
> Brian
> 

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