Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-06: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- [[ questions ]] [ section 6.1.1.1 ] * Does "Strict DoT" have a definition somewhere? I couldn't find one in 8499 nor in 7858. [[ nits ]] [ section 1 ] * "sent in clear", consider perhaps: "sent in the clear" [ section 4.1 ] * "those transaction" -> "those transactions" [ section 6.1.1 ] * "to limited subset" -> "to a limited subset" [ section 6.1.3 ] * "know to be used" -> "known to be used" _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
