Hello,
I found a few minor issues in version -08:
Sec. 4.1, 2nd paragraph: "Another differencce between the DNS data and a
particular DNS transaction" -> "Another difference is between..." (there
are two typos, actually, "cc" and "is")
Sec. 4.1, 2nd para: "A single transactions"
Sec. 4.2, 1st para: " "source IP address" is used" -> " "Source IP
address" is used" (capitalization, not sure)
Sec. 4.2, 2nd para: "For instance,
_ldap._tcp.Default-First-Site-Name._sites.gc._msdcs.example.org."
Wouldn’t it be better to explain what this QNAME reveals?
Sec. 5.2, 7th para: "Whilst there are known attacks on older versions of
TLS the most recent recommendations" -> "... TLS, the most recent ..."
Best regards,
Rafael
On 16/10/2020 13:44, [email protected] wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
Title : DNS Privacy Considerations
Author : Tim Wicinski
Filename : draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-08.txt
Pages : 29
Date : 2020-10-16
Abstract:
This document describes the privacy issues associated with the use of
the DNS by Internet users. It is intended to be an analysis of the
present situation and does not prescribe solutions. This document
obsoletes RFC 7626.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-08
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-08
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-08
Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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