On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 4:57 AM <[email protected]> wrote: > > A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt > > > The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/ > > Diff from previous version: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12 > > IETF Secretariat. > >
Minor nits: In 5.1.1. Draft Version Identification In the example "doq-i00" Where does the "i" come from? I was expecting "doq-00". 5.5. Session Resumption and 0-RTT Next to last paragraph, "errros" -> "errors" 6.3. Address Validation The end of the first paragraph "to a factor 3." -> "to a factor of 3." -- Bob Harold
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