Review is partially done. Another assignment may be needed to complete it.
Reviewer: Haoyu Song Review result: Ready with Nits Below are a few questions, nits, suggestions. The description in 4.6.2 is confusing. If the first condition causes Q to be removed, then if R is successful, Q no longer exists. Then how can R be further processed? The logic here should be better organized. 4.6.3 “the timer should examine and possibly refresh its state” -> “the timer should be examined, and its state are possibly refreshed” When mentioning a particular state or status, it’s better to put it in quotation marks or capitalize it to avoid confusion. For example, early, sent, unsent, success, … Pg.18 “For example, What if …” -> “For example, what if…” 4.6.11 “a encrypted” -> “an encrypted” _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
