5.2.  NSEC or NSEC3

  The first reason to deploy NSEC3, prevention of zone enumeration,
  makes sense when zone content is not highly structured or trivially

"only makes sense" ?

How about "applies"

  The algorithm choice therefor depends solely on the DNSKEY algorithm
  picked.

"The next record algorithm choice therefor....." to make it less
confusing?

"therefore" not "therefor" (I'm pretty sure that's not one the
USA does differently).

("therefore" means "for that reason", "therefor" means "for that"
 and is archaic)

  The NSEC3 hashing includes the FQDN in its uncompressed form.  This

"over its uncompressed form"? The hash does not 'include' it.

how about "the NSEC3 hash is performed over data including the FQDN in its
uncompressed form"

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Alex Bligh
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