Hi Fredrik,
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At 02:34 29-09-2012, Fredrik Ljunggren wrote:
A new version of the DPS framework draft was submitted adressing
issues which was raised during the IESG review. During this review
four ADs had positions on the draft - three DISCUSSes and one
comment, which called for a few edits and a revised version of the draft.
Quoting part of the DISCUSS from Russ Housley:
"Please explain the value of the policy to the parties that rely on
these signatures. At a minimum this possibility [change in policy]
needs to be explained in the Security Considerations."
Which text in draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-dps-framework-10 addresses that?
Is the DISCUSS from Sean Turner addressed in this revision?
As a nit on Section 4.8:
"It may also be appropriate to inform of any identified implications
on the protection of personally identifiable private information."
I suggest removing the word "private" as the term generally used is
"personally identifiable information".
Regards,
-sm
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