On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:06 PM, Paul Hoffman <[email protected]> wrote:
> This looks greatly improved from the -03 that started the WG Last Call. It
> clears almost all of my concerns, particularly about the overly-loose
> language.
>
> There is still one assumption being made of the reader that I think can
> cleanly be cleared up. The first paragraph of the introduction says:
>
> When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate
> their DS record(s) (or DNSKEY(s)) to their parent through some out-
> of-band method to complete the chain of trust.
>
> I think the concept of what is being told to the parent would be much clearer
> as:
>
> When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate their
> keying material to their parent through some out-of-band method to complete
> the chain of trust. Depending on the desires of the parent, the child might
> send their DNSKEY record, a DS record, or both.
I agree this text is much better.
Olafur
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