----- Original Message ----- > From: "神明達哉" <[email protected]> > To: "tjw ietf" <[email protected]> > Cc: "dnsop" <[email protected]> > Sent: Friday, 2 December, 2016 20:55:15 > Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call draft-ietf-dnsop-refuse-any
> - Section 3 > > 1. A DNS responder can choose to select one or subset of RRSets at > the QNAME. > > 'one or subset of RRSets' sounds a bit awkward to me, partly because > 'a subset of RRSets' should include 'one of RRSets' and can thus be > redundant, and partly because 'subset of RRSets" might sound related > to 'subset of an RRSet' (it's actually "a subset of set of RRSets"). > So I'd suggest changing this one of the following: > - "one or a few of RRSets (but not all of them)" > - "one or a few of RRSets" > - "a subset of RRSets" > I personally prefer the first most although it may be too verbose. Just a nitpick about using "subset" in general - it should be either "non-empty subset" (or something else) so I like "one or a few" more. Cheers, Ondrej _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
