On Mon, Nov 13, 2017 at 4:11 AM, IETF Secretariat < [email protected]> wrote:
> > The DNSOP WG has placed draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis in state > Candidate for WG Adoption (entered by Tim Wicinski) > > The document is available at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis/ > Some minor wording suggestions: The last paragraph of 1. Introduction " Since the publication of first version of this document ([RFC2845]) a mechanism based on asymmetric signatures using the SIG RR was specified (SIG(0) [RFC2931]) when this document uses symmetric authentication codes calculated by HMAC [RFC2104] using strong hash functions." I think "when" should be "where" (or "whereas"). In 4.3. TSIG Record Format "its name actually only need only be meaningful to them" Remove the first 'only' -- Bob Harold
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