On Fri, Apr 27, 2018 at 3:28 PM, Paul Hoffman <[email protected]> wrote:
> Please see the diffs at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-10 > > This covers the discussions from the past few months, which included many > of you. It has a couple of new terms, and a few reorganizations to bring > related definitions next to each other. > > This could be ready for WG Last Call. > > --Paul Hoffman > Some minor nits on the text in the changes: Multicast DNS: "Quoted from [RFC6762], Abstract)" -- There is no matching beginning parenthesis "(" that I can find. Host name: "every character in each label are a letter, a digit, or a hyphen" -- s/are/is/ 6. DNS Servers and Clients "(and may be part of the same software package)." -- s/and/but/ - would read better? Recursive mode: 'Section 4.3.1 of of [RFC1034] says "in \[recursive\] mode' -- Are the "\" characters needed? -- Bob Harold
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