Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13 Reviewer: Erik Kline Review Date: 2018-09-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-25 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: just a few things that look like they may be typos Section 2: "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me. "DNS node names" perhaps? Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/? Section 5: s/in the of/in the/? _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
