On 10/10/2018 12:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote:
The Gen-ART review for attrleaf is athttps://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/dq-cwawY1UqoGJWFUxQPuWv0oPc.
hmmm. I see that its addressing should have reached me but I'm not finding a copy in my mail archive. Thanks for the pointer:
From: Erik Kline <[email protected]> To: <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected], [email protected], [email protected] Message-ID: <[email protected]> Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2018 12:57:03 -0700 Subject: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
Section 2: "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me. "DNS node names" perhaps? Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/? Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?
done. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
