Thank you Murray. Nits addressed in our repo ( https://github.com/shuque/multi-provider-dnssec ) and queued for next revision.
Shumon. On Tue, Mar 31, 2020 at 7:58 PM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-dnsop-multi-provider-dnssec-04: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-multi-provider-dnssec/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Just a bunch of nits here: > > Section 3: > Nits: > * "... a certain amount of delay. Or that downstream ..." -- s/. O/, o/ > * "Details of how the DNSKEY RRset itself is validated differs." -- > s/differs/differ/ > > Section 5: > Nits: > * "Authentiated denial of existence ..." -- s/Authentiated/Authenticated/ > > Section 5.2: > Nits: > * "... different authentiated denial methods ..." -- > s/authentiated/authenticated/ * "Resolver software may be however designed > ..." > -- s/may be however/may, however, be/ (or equivalent) * "... more optimally > than permanent setup ..." -- perhaps "more optimally than a permanent > setup"? * > "... for a matching authentiated denial ..." -- > s/authentiated/authenticated/ > > Section 7: > Nits: > * " A Combined Signing Key (CSK), is one ..." -- s/,// > * "i.e." should be "i.e.," > * "In this case, any or all the providers could employ ..." -- s/all/all > of/ > * "... of all the other providers" -- s/all/all of/ > > Section 9: > Nits: > * "... with each others zone signing ..." -- s/others/other's/, and again > later > in the same sentence > > > >
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