Hi Andrew,

Thanks for the comment, the current document is much shorter than the
initial document. Regarding grammar, and linguistic issues - I  am adding
explanations hard to follow - have been removed and largely rewritten from
scratch. I believe the current version addresses your concerns.

Yours,
Daniel

On Mon, Jun 5, 2023 at 7:37 AM Andrew McConachie <[email protected]> wrote:

> As this document’s shepherd, FWIW I think that if the document does
> proceed in the WG it needs significant love and attention. The document
> in its current state is not well written and it would require
> significant labor to resolve its numerous grammar and linguistic issues.
> It’s also very long and if the authors want to continue with it they
> should consider shortening it or breaking it up into multiple more
> targetted drafts.
>
> My $0.02.
>
> -Andrew
>
> On 30 May 2023, at 0:58, Tim Wicinski wrote:
>
> > All,
> >
> > The chairs want to thank everyone for the feedback on this document
> > recently.  We've been in discussions with Warren and the authors about
> > this
> > document, and we have some questions we'd like the working group to
> > help us
> > resolve.
> >
> > While this work was relevant when it was first written and adopted, we
> > feel
> > that over time the DNSSEC landscape has changed and this document may
> > not
> > be as relevant as it once was.
> >
> > Questions to consider:
> >
> > Should this draft be removed from the WG?
> > Are there fundamental issues that need to be addressed in this
> > document?
> > Are there items in the document that should be moved to another
> > document?
> >
> > The chairs are currently considering abandoning this document in its
> > current state.  We'd like to hear from others on this.
> >
> > We're going to let comments run for two weeks, and wrap up June 12,
> > 2023.
> >
> > Thanks
> > tim
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