Warren, Thanks for your feedback.
I can add to the last line of the second paragraph in the abstract as follows Original: To mitigate this lack of feedback, this document describes a method for a validating recursive resolver to automatically signal an error to a monitoring agent specified by the authoritative server. New: To mitigate this lack of feedback, this document describes a method for a validating recursive resolver to automatically signal an error to a monitoring agent specified by the authoritative server. The error is encoded in the QNAME, thus the very act of sending the query is to report the error. Let me know if this works for you. Warmly, Roy > On 13 Oct 2023, at 21:59, Warren Kumari <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi there, authors (and WG), > > Thank you for this document, I found it clear, useful, and an easy read. > > I did have one comment / clarification which I think would help the document. > > I don't think that it is especially clear to the first time reader that the > query itself is the error report. Yes, it is stated (in the definition of > "Report query"), and strongly implied in the last two paragraphs of the > example, but I suspect that people will miss this. They will see "query" and > "query report", but will assume that they should do something with the > response to _er.1.broken.test.7._er.a01.agent-domain.example and somehow > send the report there. People generally don't think of the qname itself > signalling something. > > I don't have exact text to suggest to fix this, but perhaps something like: > "The report query will ultimately arrive at the monitoring agent, and the > monitoring agent extracts and parses the report from the query itself". or > "The act of sending the query is itself the error report" or something? > > I think that this should be a simple, and clear improvement… but it's also > entirely possible that it's just me who finds this confusing. If y'all think > it's clear enough as is, I'm fine to start IETF LC…. > > Please let me know LOUDLY either way, > > W > >
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